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Well done. Your opening was very captivating. It is definitely a contrast from “Waffles”. I remember the folk tale you referenced. It’s a lot scarier for the character when he realizes that this has happened before and he might not be safe if the hound can break into a church.

You also did a great job of describing the familiar sensations as well as the unfamiliar ones. Being able to feel like you’re in the storm as you read is really powerful.

I don’t know why you chose the ending you did, but I have done something similar in a similar story, and I don’t know why I did either.

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